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As we all know,nowadays many parents always make decisions for their kids.I think it is a very terrible thing for us. As far as I'm concerned,It's very important for children to do things on their own,so parents must take measures to develop their independence .To begin with,we ought to make a decision by ourselves.Furthermore,our parents are supposed to make us have a free place,which can improve our ability. Last but not the least,the parents should let the children get their pocket money from their work.then they maybe know the difficulty of making money.Children can use their money by themselves.Please remember a small thing can make a big difference. All in all,parents had better make their kids independent.Only in this way can we have a wonderful and colorful life.
