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In Shandong Weifang, kites are not only toys, but also are the city's cultural badge. Weifang with the civilization "the kites", has a history of nearly 2400 years flying kites. It's said that Chinese philosopher Mozi spent three years in Weifang kite to produce the world's first kite. Nevertheless, the fly kites dropped on first day and subsequently broke. The others believe that the kite was invented by ancient Chinese carpenter Ruban. It is said that his kite is made of wood and bamboo, flying for three days before falling to the ground.
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