作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;可适当增加从句的使用;衔接成分偏少。
It’s essential for university students to pay attention to society.With the remarkable progress of society,the university students are the future supporters.The society is fulled with knowledge and we can seek for skills from it.Besides,We can improve ourselves through the society . The Internet is popular in our life,we can obtain all kinds of information about the society,so it’s become one of the most useful method.Becoming a social worker and doing social work is another way ,you can communicate with variety people and know society deeply.Of course,newspaper and magazines are good chooses ,traveling around the world and making friends with others can build our recognization about society.Knowing the society and finding social problem can raise our faith to study hard. If i were you ,i would known the society by reading many books,doing investigation about all kinds of human,and thinking profoundly .Moreover ,Doing service for people who is sucked in trouble.
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