2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文章词汇丰富度较好，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

When it comes to shopping online,people may have a good fun of it.Nowadays ,with the development of the internet and society,the lives become more convenient for people to buy everything they want,and shopping onlin had represent the logo of fashion. It is no doublt that shopping on online is benefit for people ,but on the one hand ,with the behind of it are lots of problems .for examples,the customersmight be cheated,the bad qualities that customers bought on the line. In my views ,it is your freedom to shopping on online ,but pay attention to the commodities you will buy,and believed that it is so safety and great thatdeserved to buy.or not do it.