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More and more university graduated students who come from Beijing ,Shanghai, Guangzhou ,Shenyang or other cities choose to marry . It’s different from 1980s and 1990s’ situation .Many young people who come from cities almost punish marry till their ages are adequate ,around over 30 years old and less 40 years old.A lot of people spend time on seeking a partner who has good economy or appearance rather than love.However,The graduated students’ parents will take care of these new family’s daily life, for these young persons still exploit the way to live with the partner
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