语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
An increasing number of university graduates who come from Beijing ,Shanghai, Guangzhou ,Shenyang or other cities choose to marry . It’s different from 1980s and 1990s’ situations .Many young persons who come from cities almost put off marry till their ages are adequate ,around over 30 years old and less 40 years old.A lot of people spend time in seeking a partner who has a good economy or appearance rather than love.However,The graduated students’ parents will take care of these new families’ daily life, for these young persons still explore the way to live with the partner
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