作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;应增加文中从句的使用;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词。
To a number of the extents .The reason why leftover children appeared is that they lack of parents emotional care.In generally,the grandparents , relatives of leftover children or the friends of parents take care of children’ daily life .In most situations,their guardians don’t have high education ,from their own perspective,ensuring children health and diet is significant mission.If children are secure,they are regarded as doing good job.Guardian hardly take care of children’ study,mentally and mind requiring ,they don’t spend time in teaching children get good habits
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