作者词汇基础扎实;从句使用量不足;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Internet is used in many filed in the modern society ,it really improves the quality and suitable for our life and work . Especially ,it works on interpersonal communication . For example, it helps us communicate with aboard colleagues easily when we have to hold a meeting to discuss a business question . Or we can learn the newest knowledge through internet conveniently . We go through world news by internet timely and get to know what happened to the world everyday . The internet is good for us to communicate with each other from difference areas.
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