2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，高级词汇的使用还有很大提升空间。

It's unwise to draw the conclusion at once when you have sew something or heard some voice.Things wouldn't complete in your eyes without observation at long time.It is said that eyes also treat ourselves sometimes. What's the meaning of this sentence? For instance, there are too many ice-mountains in the sea of the Arctic Ocean,people always think these icebergs are small,but in fact, most of them hidden blew the sea level,and people could't see clearly.