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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇表达多样请继续保持，也能较准确地使用高级词汇，
As we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does. The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite. Also, as is often the case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to achieve something, but in the end they still fail due to the weaken will. So what should we avoid the dilemma? It is the prime condition of success: will and perseverance. Concentrate your energy, thought and mind . Exclusively on the business in which you are engaged, hanging on in there and be patient. As Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your ultimate success but yourself.
