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How to Improve Student's Mental Health As we can know, it is important to maintain the students' mental health, but we usually don't know how to do that. After all, having mental health can make students process better growth. As to this condition, not only the schools should do efforts, but the students themselves should also do something. To illustrate, the schools should display some activities, which are healthy and interesting, to help the students develop mental health. Most of students will lose interest while the activities are boring, which leads the effects becoming losing the effect. The schools should take measures to combining the theoretical knowledge and practical skills. The students can relax their mood, and maintain a positive heart whatever have opened. In the daily time, they should watch some good articles, and learn to how to relax themselves and face the problem have opened or is opening. To improve students' mental health, I consider that need be focused on students and the schools prepare to assist them.