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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1952
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
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作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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How to Improve Student's Mental Health As we can know, it is important to maintain the students' mental health, but we usually don't know how to do that. After all, having mental health can make students process better growth. As to this condition, not only the schools should do efforts, but the students themselves should also do something. To illustrate, the schools should display some activities, which are healthy and interesting, to help the students develop mental health. Most of students will lose interest while the activities are boring, which leads the effects becoming losing the effect. The schools should take measures to combining the theoretical knowledge and practical skills. The students can relax their mood, and maintain a positive heart whatever have opened. In the daily time, they should watch some good articles, and learn to how to relax themselves and face the problem have opened or is opening. To improve students' mental health, I consider that need be focused on students and the schools prepare to assist them.

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