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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。
As is vividly drawn in the picture above,a man and a women using the computer to connect with upstairs people. With the social technology develops,more and more electronic equiment appears,people can connect other conveniently,but I think this way can not replace face-to-face contact. Nowaday technology growing with a fast pace,a great deal of social communicate APP was comes out which brings great convenience to our people's life, but at the same time,some problems come with that. Firstly,Internet cheat,recently,a lot of teenager was cheated by "Internet friend",these sort of friends are stangers. You acturely don't know what is their turely informations,so this is dangerous. Secondly,people alway using this way to connect other,that will cause some relationship problems. It is goes without saying this,internet on the way people communicate has their own advantages,like convenience,efficience and funny. We can make full use of advantage that we can life in a better live.
