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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达灵活丰富,希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly drawn in the picture above, a man and an women using the computer to connect with upstairs people. With the development of social technology, more and more electronic equiment appears,people can connect other conveniently,but I think this way can not replace face-to-face contact. Nowadays technology growing with a fast pace,a great deal of social communicate APP was comes out which brings great convenience to our people's life, but at the same time,some problems come with that. Firstly,Internet cheat,recently,a lot of teenager was cheated by "Internet friend",these type of friends are stangers. You actually don't know what is their truely information,so this is dangerous. Secondly,people always using this way to connect other,that will cause some relationship problems. It is goes without saying this,internet on the way people communicate has their own advantages,like convenience,efficiency and funny. We can make full use of advantage that we can life in a better live.

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