题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;熟练使用了一些长难句;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Recently,internet has become a common tendency for people to communicate with each other,in this way blog is one of the popular way.with the development of technology,internet has changed our daily lives. when it comes to the impact of internet on interpersonal communication,people's opinion's differ,some people think that using the internet to communicate with each other is a good way,but some other people do not agree with them,they think people talk to each other face to face is better. those who are in favor of using internet to communicate,claim that it has a lot of advantages,firstly it is very convenient for people to exchange their feelings about the things happened to them.secondly,using the internet is good for people to keep up with the pace of technology.lastbut not lease,it can be used to ask for the doctors'help from all over the world. those who are opposed to it hold that disadvantages are many,in the first,we can see from the picture,when the father asked his daughter about how was school today,the girl said:"you can read all about it on my blog,dad."instead of answering it directly.something is lost between the father and daughter.in the second place,people can lie to anyone on the internet. up until now,we can see it clearly that internet can make our lives be more convenient,the key lies in the user how to use it,so long as we can make proper use of it,it can be most helpful to us in many respects.