2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达较为灵活，高级词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

With the development of technology,more and more people have thier own mobile phone.The acess of getting information become more and more esay.As we all know,science and technology is a two sides sword.The same time we enjoying the convenience they brought to us,they also brought harm to people.Because of the entertainment they brought ,more and more people fall into it. In the picture,we can see many people are crossing the street looking at their mobile phone and uesing walking sticks in order to see.The phone takes them too much time that they do not have time to do something for themself.