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作者在句法层面做的很棒；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
My hometown visited, the most interesting destination I am in great passion to take the visitors to see, it's a must to be the Sky-Moon Lake, which is located in a local middle school. As a romantic location with imaginations, it is quiet, thousand times as beautiful as a beauty, fabulous, and always possesses the magic to provide us the sense of peace, along with the trees beside it and the birds above of it. Attibuted as it is, it turns on diverse kinds of patents in four seasons. In spring, it is in the color of green, the wave moving, comparing with its becoming crowed for its function of fostering wind in summer. Then in autumn, it would be desirably decorated by the golden of the fallen leaves. And when eventually comes to winter, it is still gorgeous, eye-catching alike the aristocrat woman in Europe.
