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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

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When you see something or listen something, will you give the conclusion as soon as possible? Some persons maybe will. So if it's wise to give the conclusion rightly? In my opinion, I think it is not wise. In order to support my opinion. Here I will give three reasons. Firstly, there must be a certain situation when behaviour happens. Such as a woman will fall down and the man behind her helps to get up. Can you say these two persons are fall in love? Secondly, person is subjective in most occasions. So the dialog you hear maybe just the person's own idea. It's not objective. Last but not least, the persons who are involved in the things are the most dependable, so we must give the right to him to say something before we give the conclusion. In a word, it's not wise to give the conclusion immediately when you hear something or listen something.

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