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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10393
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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As an old saying goes, " It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket." With the development of the technology and society , we have learnt a host of subjects since we were in primary school. So as I was a little boy, my parents told me that I should acknowledge amounts of word instead of simple "dad" or "mom". Why it is unwise that we put all eggs in one basket? The reason is that if we put all eggs in one basket which was accidently broken by a naughty boy , we lost all eggs absolutely. but if we take several parts of eggs into 3 or 4 baskets, we would not lose all eggs after all. So it is significant that we are suggested to learn diverse subjects. At least, we are expected to leave a back way for ourselves. As far as I am concerned, being a person in this fast digital time, we should have a diverse progressing as possible as I can .

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