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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
从句比重偏低，有几处句子错误；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
This is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon can be associated with impact of the internet on our life and study.A case in point is the guy in the picture:the student thought study in internet by himself can replace accept education from school. In my opinion,i am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to go to school rather than study by ourselves on the internet.The reasons go as following. To begin with,internet can nerver replace the traditional education ways.if we have problem,we can not solve it immediately and clearly.Because we can not conmmunicate with other face to face.In addition,when we surfing on the internet,we could be attract by some new informations and not concertrate on our study.meanwhile,we intend to play game and wacth movie mostly.however, traditional education can provide more advices and guidces by discussing with teacher and classmates. In a word,do bear in mind:tradditional education nerver replace by internet.we should realize the significance of school.
