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In China there are many famous place that interest many people come here to see. I am so pleasure thar you can come to my hometown, now let me introduce the most interestingplace I want to take you to see. Weast lake, I think you must have learn something about it. It is the most intersetingplace in Hangzhou, there are lager of people come here to see the vew of the lake from all over the world. As we all know China has many old story in its history, of course the weast lake. There have a romintic story about Xuxian and Bainiangzi. So, people think it is a good place to have a appointment. I am look forward you to come to my hometown
