正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Good friend Everyone has good friends,me too.My good friend is Lisa Lin.She is the same age as me.I knew her when I was 7 years old.She is my classmate in primary school.We play together in the school.We got to do sports together.We help each other.We hope we will be friend forever.