词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Good friend Everyone has good friends, me too. My good friend is Lisa Lin. She is the same age as me. I knew her when I was 7 years old. She is my classmate in primary school. We play together in the school. We got to do sports together. We help each other. We hope we will be friend forever.