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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9023
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实。

用户练习作文:

Life is short sometimes, we have no idea when will we die and how long can we live in the world, we often unconsciously spend our time on something which is meaningless and wast so much time on it, and we didn't feel the meaning of life inside. In my hometown, there are many young fellow and girls who graduate from well known university make decisions to stay in our hometown to improve the education of children. As we know the condition of most hometown is very difficult, they over come various kinds of problems to contribute themselves to the education, the life of their life is meaningful even if they may not be known by people. In my opinion, life is short and we should do something meaningful not only end up by ourselves but also for others, we should try to contribute something to our community, to our social,and make it together to get progress together to make our future more brightness and civilize.

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