作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实。
Life is short sometimes, we have no idea when will we die and how long can we live in the world, we often unconsciously spend our time on something which is meaningless and wast so much time on it, and we didn't feel the meaning of life inside. In my hometown, there are many young fellow and girls who graduate from well known university make decisions to stay in our hometown to improve the education of children. As we know the condition of most hometown is very difficult, they over come various kinds of problems to contribute themselves to the education, the life of their life is meaningful even if they may not be known by people. In my opinion, life is short and we should do something meaningful not only end up by ourselves but also for others, we should try to contribute something to our community, to our social,and make it together to get progress together to make our future more brightness and civilize.