3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但要注意减少拼写错误。
As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there are many people sitting in front of computer in a huge spider. They are not far away their fellows at all but have no contact owing to obstacles caused by a series of barriers. Undoubtedly, the spider in the cartoon refers to internet connecting us and drawings aim to subtly reveal the problem of internet. Due to the quickening pace of technique, internet has walked into our life circle, intangibly shirking the distance between people. But my own attention is less that of the overwhelming strength of internet than it is of the slightly more luxuries agony of the disadvantages brought by internet. To begin with, people communicate less with their parents or friends, instead, absorb in satisfication in the virtual world, which may negatively effect one's personality, temperature and mental health, especially of teenagers who are not mature in the mind. On the other hand, internet is a tool which is used to serve for work and life rather than rein work and life. Once we change the relationship, I afraid that the whole society will be overturned. Fortunately, this is not the Day of Judgement. It's imperative that drastic measures should be taken to solve this problem. On the one hand, we can organize internet education properly so that change people's attitude toward internet rootly. On the other hand, communities or colleges could hold more entertainment activities to enrich daliy life of citizens and simutaneously be away from internet temporarily. Everything has two sides and what is most impotant is how we take advantage of it.