小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I have a good friend. She was my roommate of my high school. From the first day I met her, she looked fatter than me. Now she is more plump. But that does not affect her impression in my mind at all. She is outgoing and like to talk. In most cases, she could easily make a normal thing lovely and funny, especially when she speaks a story. Every story out of her mouth, the story become more attractive. The skill of speaking story is because she likes reading and writing. When conversation is a less problem, making friends are easier. She could have a topic easily and make the atmosphere easily, that skill may benefit from the wider knowledge. When someone talk with her humorous, I believe everyone like to talk with her.