3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
文中词汇使用灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。
As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there are many characters sitting in front of computer in a huge spider. They are not far away their fellows at all but have no contact owing to obstacles triggered by a series of barriers. Undoubtedly, the spider in the carton refers to internet connecting us and drawings aim to subtly reveal the dilemma of internet. Due to the quickening pace of technique, internet has walked into our life, intangibly shirking the distance between individuals. Nonetheless my own attention is less that of the overwhelming strength of internet than it is of the slightly more luxuries agony of the disadvantages of internet. To begin with, people communicate less with their parents or friends, instead, absorb in satisfication in the virtual world, which may negatively effect one's personality, temperature and mental health, especially of teenagers who are not mature in the mind. On the other hand, internet is a tool which is used to serve for work and life rather than lead work and life. Once we change the relationship, I afraid that the whole society will be overturned. Fortunately, this is not the Day of Judgement. It's imperative that drastic measures should be taken to address this problem. On the one hand, we can organize internet education properly so that change people's attitude toward internet rootly. On the other hand, communities or colleges could hold more entertainment activities to enrich daliy life of citizens and simutaneously be away from internet temporarily. Everything has two sides and what important is how we take advantage of it.