文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;简单句偏多了;语言不流畅。
Nowadays an old saying, “ Listening is more important than talking ” , comes into vogue. The saying tells us the true essence of communication with others in the society, which means paying attention to others ’ opinions is much more important than expressing one ’ s own words. Para 2 As for me, there are two reasons accounting for the correctness of this principle. 1 To start with, listening shows your respect for others. In such a competitive society, willingness to listen can make you gain trust and friendship, which is the basic rule of socialization. A talkative person without ear is doomed to be alienated. 2Furthermore, listening can really benefit yourself. There is no denying that you are the one to make choices in your life. However, a variety of ideas from others will definitely enrich your mind and present some enlightenment to your future actions. Para 3 According to what is said above, listening truly outweighs talking on many occasions. In modern society, we need to master some communication skills. Only when we realize the importance of listening can we lead a better life.
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