2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am very excited to hear that you will come to China rencently.China is a charming place to trveal an I am glad to show you some of the popular place. First is The Great Wall,it is very famous all of the world.In ancient,the reason for built it is that provent the millity of other people.In that time,built it sames an imporsitant mission.lunckily,the ancient built it succeed so that we can see it. The second you have to visit is that the water town in south of China.The south of China is a place where people don't want leave.There have many beautiful house localed by the said of river.The history of there is very charming too. China is a place which have very suprise to show the world.It have varies sight waiting you to find ,if you can,i have a suggestion to you is that you could stay a long time to feel different from different part of China.Wish you a great expreice.