2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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about 100 years ago ,computer was invented,and it have involved into every files of human life.human use computer in their daliy lifes.people use computer to their families and friends who live far away;some likes playing computer games;manny sysytems,like electrecity,transprtations, and finacies system, are controled by computers;most of modren work are reguite to work with computers. the computers give our life more convenience ,and people can do the job more effecient.However ,some new problems come up.computer can do things that was do only by humen,and they don't ask for pay,so manny bosses of factory fired manny of their workers and replaied them with computer workers.so hundres of thousands of people lost of their job.this problem is increasely inteensed. in my oppinio,we can't change the history,but we should learn to know that computer can't complerely replay human.so don't take the computer for gods.