Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活。
From my perspective, I really agree the saying "Listening is more important than talking". On the one hand, listening is beneficial for us to understand the mean what he or she has expressed. On the other hand, it is a wonderful way to respect the people who is talking with you. Therefore, I will cite a example to illustrate how significant listening is. One day, my math teacher set homework for us. at the moment,I was chating with my deskmate happily so that we didn't know the homework as well as the request of it completely. Finally, our teacher let us to sweep the classroom for two weeks. From my exprience, I can draw a conclusion that we are supposed to listen the talking people while chat with others. What's more, if we listen to others, we can get more acknowleadge. Last but not least, if we do that, we will make lots of friends,which can help us in one day.