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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46209
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

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From my perspective, I really agree the saying "Listening is more important than talking". On the one hand, listening is beneficial for us to understand the mean what he or she has expressed. On the other hand, it is a wonderful way to respect the people who is talking with you. Therefore, I will cite a example to illustrate how significant listening is. One day, my math teacher set homework for us. at the moment,I was chating with my deskmate happily so that we didn't know the homework as well as the request of it completely. Finally, our teacher let us to sweep the classroom for two weeks. From my experience, I can draw a conclusion that we are supposed to listen the talking people while chat with others. What's more, if we listen to others, we can get more knowledge. Last but not least, if we do that, we will make lots of friends,which can help us in one day.

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