2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I‘m glad to hear that you are coming to China recently. China is a charming place to travel and I am excited to show you some of the popular places. First is The Great Wall which is famous all of the world. In ancient times, the reason for built it is that hold the army of another country back. At that time, built it successfully thought as an impossible mission.Luckily,the ancient makes it so we can see it. The second place where you must visit is that the water town in the south of China. The south of China is a place where people don't want leave. There have many beautiful house located by the said of river. The history there is very charming too. China is a place which have very suprise to show the world. It has many sights waiting you to find , if you can, I have a suggestion to provide is that you could stay a long time to feel different from different part of China. Wish you a great exprience.