拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
I have a good friend. She was my roommate of my high school. From the first day I met her, she looked fatter than me. Although she is more plump now, that does not affect her impression in my mind at all. She is outgoing and like to talk. In most cases, she could easily make a normal thing lovely and funny, especially when she speaks a story. Every story out of her mouth, the story become more attractive. According to my understanding of her, the skill of speaking story is because she likes reading and writing. When she read a funny story, she likes speaking out and sharing with others. When conversation is a less problem, making friends are easier. She could have a topic easily and make atmosphere relax, that skill may benefit from the wider knowledge. When someone talk with her humorous, I believe everyone like to talk with her.