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I‘m glad to hear that you are coming to China recently. China is a charming place to travel and I am excited to show you some of the popular places. First is The Great Wall which is famous all of the world. In ancient times, the reason for built it is that hold the army of another country back. At that time, built it successfully thought as an impossible mission. Luckily, the ancient makes it so we can see it. The second place where you must visit is that the water town in the south of China. The south of China is a place where people don't want leave. There are many beautiful houses located by the said of river. The history there is very charming too. China is a place which have very suprise to show the world. It has many sights waiting you to find , if you can, I have a suggestion to provide is that if you can，you should spend a long time to feel the difference from different area of China. Wish you a good experience.
