2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；简单句偏多了；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

hi!my friend,long time no see since you leave china three years ago.when i hear that you will come to my hometown,i'm glad to lead to interestplace.there have many interest of place around hometown.you can breath flesh air and tast delicious food,and so on.you will feel it's most beautiful place. i think you like it.