采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视。
its unrational and unrasonable to draw a conclusion when you see or just listen something,you know,with time went by,people are getting more and more busy in life,but there is also some problems between us. for the first time,the virtue world,they say something not really means that it is real.the gossip and scandal of life maybe somebody lies.
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