作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
How to Live a Meaningful Life? Among all the highlighted topics, one is "how to live a meaningful life".As for this topic, everyone's opinion varies. As the saying goes, "The greatest use of life is to spend it something that will outlast it." I cannot agree with it more. If one spends all his life pursuing benefits for himself, he will surely feel fruitless and meaningless when he gets old. From Nelson Mandela's life, we can get that he never wavered in his devotion to democracy, equality and learning. His life has been an inspiration in South Africa and throughout the world. In a life that symbolizes the triumph of human spirits, Nelson Mandela accepted the 1993 Nobel Peace Prize. His life, though limited, definitely lasts longer. That's a life worth living.Therefore, if there are a way to make my life more meaningful, I believe it should be to find something I'm interested in and also is helpful to others or the whole society. Only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life.