作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但有个别拼写错误;从句数量偏少;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
In recent years, RMB has appreciated constantly due to the impact that from internal dynamics of Chinese economy and external pressures. The internal impact includes the level of Chinese goods price, inflation,development of economy and rate level.External impacts are the main pressures which from developed countries, especially Japan and America. The appreciation of RMB not only can increase the purchase ability of RMB, extending the demands of import production which demostic consumer need, but also can relief the cost's burden of import energe and rude materials. But it can inlfuence the stability of demostic financial market, leting the cost's float of export production and result in decreasing the competion of chinese production in international market.
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