小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She was my roommate of my high school. From the first day I met her, she looked fatter than me. Although she is more plump now, that does not affect her impression in my mind at all. She is outgoing and like to talk. In most cases, she could easily make a normal thing lovely and funny, especially when she speaks a story. Every story out of her mouth, the story become more attractive. According to my understanding of her, the skill of speaking story is because she likes reading and writing. When she read a funny story, she likes speaking out and sharing with others. When conversation is a less problem, making friends are easier. She could have a topic easily and make atmosphere relax, that skill may benefit from the wider knowledge. When someone talk with her humorous, nobody don't like to talk with her. Compare with her, I am more like logic thing rather than these funny things. So the math is my strength. I don't like read much, but the logic story attract me much. The hard thing for me is to remember some random funny thing, but once I understand the logic story, I will remember them easily.