2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

从句数量偏少；文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉。

Group purchase is a new shop way. It means many people by a same product together aim to get the lower price by expanding the negotiation ability with the salers. With the flourishing and development of Chinese e-commerce, oline group purchase becomes popular in Chinese internet users. It has became the mainly mehtod of group purchase. Now, many Chinese websits are trying to do group purchase due to its convenient, quick, low price, freedom region and develop quickly, such as Juhuasuan, Nuomituan and so on. According to imformation, the youngers in big and middle cities of china are the main groups of internet group purchase.