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Group purchase is a new shopping mode. It means many people by a same product together aim to get the lower price by expanding the negotiation ability with the salers. With the flourishing and development of Chinese e-commerce, oline group purchase becomes popular in Chinese internet users. It has became the mainly mehtod of group purchase. Now, many Chinese websits are trying to do group purchase due to its convenient, quick, low price, freedom region and develop quickly, such as Juhuasuan, Nuomituan and so on. According to imformation, the youngers in big and middle cities of china are the main groups of internet group purchase.
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