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单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend. She was my roommate of my high school. From the first day I met her, she looked fatter than me. Although she is more plump now, that does not affect her impression in my mind at all. She is outgoing and like to talk. In most cases, she could easily make a normal thing lovely and funny, especially when she speaks a story. Every story out of her mouth, the story become more attractive. According to my understanding of her, the skill of speaking story is because she likes reading and writing. When she read a funny story, she likes to speak out and share with others. She could have a topic easily and make atmosphere relax, that skill may benefit from the wider knowledge. When someone talk with her humorous, nobody don't like to talk with her. When conversation is a less problem, making friends are easier. Compare with her, I am more like logic thing rather than these funny things. So the math is my strength. I don't like read much, but the logical story attract me much. The hard thing for me is to remember some random things, but once I understand the logical story, I will remember them easily.
