2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

Some people consider that internet can make study and work more efficient. However, others think internet make the youth drop them in it, and then their study will begin badly. In my opinion, every thing has two sides. Internet can broden our horizon, even we stay at home ,we still could see many news about other countries. It also make our life more easily. we can go shopping whithout go out .we just sit in the sofo and move our finger that to choose the things we like.when we study in home ,learning by ourselves.We can search some information about our study though the internet.Some people consider that internet can make study and work more efficient. However, others think internet make the youth drop them in it, and then their study will begin badly.