托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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Heminway said in The Old and the Sea, "a man is not made for defeate, a man can be destroyed but not defeated". This sentence shows the strong mind of a man who is persistenting in his pursuit. However, is it true that persevance makes people stronger? Different people hold different view on this issue, and as far as I am concerned. I cannot agree more with that opinion. My reasons are as follows. My main reason is that persevance brings us a stronger will. It cannot be denied that, in the pursuit of an ultimate goal, we are bound to go through one failure after another. Only people with a strong will can endure all the twists and turns and achieve final success. What's more, in the process of engaging in their pursuits, their spirits will get furture improvement. Therefore, after experiencing all kinds of diffilcuties and upsets, eventually, they develop a stronger will, with which they are able to deal with various challenges boldly. Sometimes, it is strong will rather than gifted skills that really count in our way of realizing dream. Another reason is that persevance can promote our bearing capability. We cannot surmount the obstacles of achieving success without a strong mind any more than a dancer can make a difference without enough practice. It would be problematic to claim that persevance can ensure us a happy ending but it is not the same as saying persevance is uselessl for us to approach a fruitful result. In fact, when we are determined to complete a task and consistently persist in the routine, a stronger mind will be available. Confronted with various difficulties, we will never be afraid because a principle has been erected in our minds, that is failure is not afraid, only afraid itself is. All in all, persevance is of great importance in our life road. It is true that persevance is not a guarantee of success, but it does provide us a significant experience. With the stronger will and bearing capability it gives us, we are able to realize our determinations much more easily.