2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分学术词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。

As you noticed on the statistics about education pays,we know that the higher educational digree we have,the more earnings we can get.Meanwhile,The statistics also tell us that the competition of searching jobs is so hard now. Accroding to these messages,I almost could feel big pressure about my life in the future as colleage students.you know,The unemployment rate of groups who got high school diploma is 9.4% in the United States.After our graduation from school,it's probaly for us to fall to find job.therefore,if we don't have special ability of taking care of practical and personal affairs,It's too hard for us to step into society successfully. so,we must strengthen knowlege what we have learned and study more .Besides,our vision can't concentrate some certain zone.