2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

about 100 years ago ,computer was invented,and it have involved into every file of human life.human use computer in their daily life.people use computer to keep in touch with their families and friends who live far away;some like playing computer games;manny systems,like electrecity,transprtations, and financies system, are controled by computers;most of modren work are reguire to work with computers. the computers make our life more convenience ,and people can do the job more efficiently.However ,some new problems come up.computer can do things that was done only by humen,and they don't ask for payment,so manny bosses of factory fired their workers and replaced them with computer workers.so hundres of thousands of people lost of their job.this problem is increasely inteensed. in my oppinion,we can't change the history,but we should learn to know that computer can't complerely replace human.so don't take the computer as god.