小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dogs.it names dudu.It is very fat.now,it is nine-years-old. It likes fish.everyday,i take it to go for a walk.sometimes,it gives me some troubles.But,it also gives me happy.It likes my family.my mother and my father awalys take it to hospital .I hope it very health.I Like it forever.My classmates often palys with him.