2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

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In recent year, internet has became more and more popullar. Many people use it to work、make friends、relax and so on. It is true that computer makes our life more convenient and comfortable. It can open our views of the word. But it also brings much negative influence. Firstly, many young people are addicted in the internet. It impact their studies, even their life. Moreover, internet makes some people lost in the virtual world. They increasingly lose the capacity of talking with people face to face. At last but not at least, because of the covenience of computer, many people lose interpersonal skills、writing skills and so on. All in all, we should spend less time on line. We must live in the real life. We can't servive without link to others. The interpersonal is very important.