2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇基本功很好，但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Computer and man From 1900's, as new human,we can't leave computer in everything,esepecially work.Computer leads an important role step by step,such as work ,study,life,travel,and shopping. Do you know Alibaba? In these years, internet shopping is as a madman,spreading as weeds in rich soil. Men,women,young,old people,they like shopping in the internet. Why is this way buying thing so hotly? I think it must talk the varieties of goods, it involes many aspects, whatever you need, whatever you'd like to buy,Internet shopping can meet you with all kinds of goods for your choice. It doesnot only provide visible goods，but various services, you can find a people who can help you take care of your baby or your aged parents ,even your lovely pet,help you clean you house, help you white your wall and so on. Once you come up with your want,Alibaba satisfy you with surpise. Do you know double 11? May it was a very ordinary day in the past, but nowaday,this day changes ,changes tremendously,which it cant't be imagined. None think it is being a crazy shopping day for the world, for everyone. I think it is a day imprinted times mark. In double 11 day, especailly the 0:00 o'clock, I think internet is very powerful,but that day, internet always performs too busy and tired to stop. Visially,people enjoy the everthing that the computer bring to them. And do you see the first computer,it was so huge, it take up a room,and its function also was simple ,just for calculating and memory. But now computer attract people's eyes, it is charming,colorful slender,ligth.you can carry them everywhere. and its functions are more and more.we can paly large games and install all kinds off procedure to meet work ,study need, and its ability is more powfull and its speed of operation is more and more faster. All this ,for a computer ,it is from human's hard work. Human improve a computer continually, make it better. Computer is a friend for man, a helper for man, a lover for man.