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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活，但有个别拼写错误；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
From my perspective, the most interestingplace in my hometown is the temple of Guanggong, which I want to introduct to my foreign friend. Because he is very intereted about Chinese culture. Especially about ancient China. Guangong is a well-known hero in Chinese history. And now, he is the respector of fidelity and justice. His mental play an important role in oue local culture. At the same time, I think, the temple was built from Dynasty Song to Dynasty Qing for commemorating him is very grand and antique. The temple is very famous in China. Through this travel, my friend will learn more about Chinese culture of construction. He will be very happy if he knows about the travel.
